"致谢一页纸,改了五遍还是被导师说太敷衍?" 别慌,你不是一个人——墨尔本大学隔壁咖啡厅里,多少留学生边啃三明治边重写致谢,就为那句‘真诚又不肉麻’的表达。
? 别再写‘感谢所有人’!澳洲教授最在意这3个细节
✅ 细节1:导师名字+具体帮助=诚意拉满
别只写‘Thanks to my supervisor’。澳洲导师超看重具体贡献。比如:
- ‘Special thanks to Dr. Emily Chen for her patient feedback on Chapter 3’s data analysis — it saved me from a major coding error.’
- ‘I’m grateful to Prof. James Liu for recommending the ANU archives — those rare policy reports were gold.’
真实场景:悉尼大学有学生因写明“导师凌晨回邮件批注图表格式”,答辩时被点名表扬“懂得感恩细节”。
✅ 细节2:同门/同学别漏掉,但要用对方式
澳洲学术圈讲究‘collaborative spirit’。你可以写:
- ‘Thanks to Mia and Liam for weekly study sessions at the library — coffee and LaTeX fixes included.’
- ‘Grateful to the 2023 HDR cohort for moral support during submission week — especially the group chat memes.’
小提醒:别用‘helped me a lot’这种空话,换成‘explained RStudio loops when I was stuck’才显真实。
✅ 细节3:家人感谢要有‘澳洲味’
别直接复制中文致谢模板!澳洲更接受克制而温暖的表达。例如:
| Too Emotional | To my parents, without you I would be nothing. |
| Better Version | To my parents, for their constant encouragement and midnight video calls across the time zones. |
昆士兰大学写作中心明确建议:避免宗教或过度情感词(如soul、destiny),保持学术场合的得体。
? 亲测有效 tip: 提交前扔给本地同学读一遍!如果他们说‘Sounds like a real person, not a robot’,那就稳了。
? 另一个小心机: 致谢末尾加一句 ‘This research would not exist without the generosity of these individuals.’ 能瞬间提升整体格调。


